Friday 10 October 2008

My Presentation...

WWW: =)
*Compared historical image of woman and New image of woman
*Not alot of text on the slides
*Sound on the slides and Colour- looked good
*Explained the points on the slide
*Migrain analysis
*Highlighted key points
*Conclusion

EBI: =(
*I compared historical text to my text
*Spoke a bit slower ans stop saying yeah!
*Customise the animations so each point comes up one by one
*Spell Check!!! PHALLIC ,Not FALIX heehehehe

Targets:
*Research representation of woman more on blog
*Research on the director
*Link theorists to the text
*Analyse the text more

8 comments:

Module 5- Madenah said...

WWW:
-Didnt read of the board
-Didnt have lots of texts on slides
-Engaged with audience
-Talked about historical texts which re relevent to your text

EBI:
-Spell check
-Do more research on blog about representation of women
-More analysis of text

=) xxx

lanzel said...

www
did a od vs new of the history of women in society which is already adding to SHEP.

ebi
slow down when addressing the audience.

NuNu said...

WWW:
-Detailed and useful handout
-Researched her theorists well
-Well explained and summarised MIGRAIN analysis
-Interacted/ Involved with the audience

EBI:
Slowed down a bit
More confidence

Hardeep said...

WWW:
didnt read of the board-had her own notes
had good shep

EBI:
you slowed down
and most importantly SPELLCHECKED!!

Jordan AS Media Blog said...

www
-had noise that surpirsed audience
- uses theorists to relate
- had a lot of things to say

EBI
- if she carried on what she was sayin rather than stuttering
- a bit too much information on slides
done the whole migrain.

Tremaine said...

www
didnt just read of the board
engaged with the audience
researched topic well

EBI
if u talked slower
always check your spelling after you have finished

Saman said...

www:
You have short & sweet slides
Engaged woth the auidence
Was confident

ebi:
Spoke a little bit slower

.ღ.sunaina.ღ. said...

WWW:
- wider research
- Good presentation skills

EBI:
- Slow down when reading
- Spell checked her work