WWW:
*Good book research
*Good wider contextual evidence
*Good links to feminist theorists and theories
EBI:
*Lots of small errors
*Use of the word ‘shows’ toooooooo much
*Need more reference to the genre and its repertoire of elements
Next Step:
*Carry out a detailed genre analysis.
*Aim to meet the characteristics for B grade essay using mark scheme to improve
*Sort out the footnotes
*Do research on the action adventure genre
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